It may be just me but I feel the music does not really go that well with the game but is understandable given this is a free indie game made for a Gamejam, and it's definitely better than no music at all.
Also the story although interesting gets a little bit...confusing? like there is a lot of things happening at the same time? it may just be me being dumb, please don't mind me. It is still a pretty solid VN with a good ending.
Keep the good work!